Anime Sues

animesues @ 2004-04-09T11:24:00

2004-04-09T15:35:30Z

Story Or Series Title: Say This Isn't So
Fandom: Yu-Yu Hakusho
~~Culprit~~ Author's Name: sachiroyurei

Full Name (plus titles if any): Yaminaka Hikari and Yaminaka Chie
Full Species(es): Fangirlie!
Hair Color (include adjectives): Hikari - red hair. I cant find where it mentions Chie's.
Eye Color (include adjectives): Can't Find
Unusual Markings/Colorations: No.
Special Possessions (if any): Hikari has the YYH manga. -gasp-

Annoying Origin: Apparently from a 'regular' world.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: She meets them, she has the manga and yeah.
Annoying Special Abilities: Fangirl! Japanese.
Other Annoying Traits: Hikari can sing REALLY good. What's wrong with having a regular voice?

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

“Hello, chick!” Kuwabara smiled cheekily. A vein pulsed. “ITAI!!!” They looked at the white fan I was holding [Sanzo style.] and the bump on Kuwabara’s head. “Don’t call me chick, carrot!” I yelled. “Serves you right!” Yuusuke said laughing. Kurama was holding back to be polite. “So, you’re telling me Reikai is real? I’ve only read of it in a manga. The ruler of Reikai was supposed to be a toddler named Koenma. Working for him is the Reikai Tantei group. The leader was a resurrected boy, Yuusuke, an idiot, Kuwabara, a polite youkai Kurama and a cool fire apparition Hiei,” I explained. “Well, you got that right but what do you mean you read it in a manga?” Yuusuke asked. I rummaged through my backpack. Pulling out Yu Yu Hakusho volume ten and handed it to Yuusuke.

“Here’s the manga.” They crowded around it like kids. Suddenly Yuusuke laughed. “Look! This is when Kuwabara got kicked out of the ring by Shishiwakamaru!” “Shut up Urameshi! Here, where you got beaten up by Genkai’s training!” Kuwabara yelled. “At least it wasn’t embarrassing!” Yuusuke yelled back. WHACK!

“Hoi, Koenma! I got the girl!” Yuusuke yelled. A white fan made contact with his head. “Don’t say it in a disgusting way! If you were sent to find me, you should at least know my name,” the girl said. Perceiving the silence, she glared at them. “You don’t know my name, so you?” They nodded meekly under her glare. “Really a bunch of dumbasses, except for Kurama and Hiei,” she commented Koenma, who was standing on the table did a slight bow. “Hello, I am Koenma, ruler of Reikai. Who’s that little boy?”

“I’m Yaminaka Chie, my sister’s brother,” Chie said. “I guess I should tell you my name. It’s Yaminaka Hikari,” the red haired girl said. “One means Wisdom within Darkness while the other means Light within Darkness. Nice names,” Koenma complimented.

“Our names are not just for show. It signifies our best traits. I’m named Chie because I’m very smart and wise until I skipped two grades into junior high, though I can go beyond that, I wouldn’t like to grow up too fast,” Chie explained.

“Then what does your sister’s name signifies?”

“Mochiron, her sunny attitude. Not only that, my sister can brighten anyone’s day with her singing and dancing. She’s the best in the world!” Chie exclaimed, proud of having such a sister. “Really? Can she sing right now? Something about nature? I want to see how good she is,” Koenma asked. Hikari blushed slightly. “I guess I could give it a try.” She walks over to the window and looks out. She takes a deep breath and starts to sing.

Everyone burst into claps, except Hiei. “You were amazing!” Yuusuke said. “You have a very gifted voice,” Koenma spoke. “You sound like an angel…” Kuwabara drifted off his sentence into his dreamworld. “You sang very well,” Kurama praised. Hikari gushed from the praises and replied with a, “Thanks.” “What do you think, Hiei?” Kurama asked.

Without the fangirl japanese, the perfect singing, and Hikari having an copy of the YYH manga--this could actually of been a good fanfic. I'm not a fan of the author's writing, but things improved.

In the end of the first chapter, she says this character not a mary sues. :\ Hmm.

But she has potentional and time to change her original characters.

animesues @ 2004-04-04T09:22:00

2004-04-04T13:30:17Z

Story Or Series Title: Our Parents
Fandom: Yu-Yu-Hakusho
~~Culprit~~ Author's Name: Hiei'sdabest (I really should be scared, right?)

Full Name (plus titles if any): Yasho Urameshi, Kia Urameshi, Kazu Kuwabara, Yuki Kuwabara, Sheenza Minamino, Kasho Minamino, Hieku Jaganshi, Misha Jaganshi
Full Species(es): Kidddo-o-parents
Hair Color (include adjectives): See parents.
Eye Color (include adjectives): See parents
Unusual Markings/Colorations: No. But they stole their parent's looks.
Special Possessions (if any): The powers of their parents.

Annoying Origin: Aparently their mother's stomach. :\
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: They are their freaking children.
Annoying Special Abilities: The powers of their parents.
Other Annoying Traits: They seem to be copies of their parents. The author seems to like Hiei. An Hiei fangirl I sense running around in Hell.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Kia: Shut up and get ready for school!

Yasho: I’m not going, remember?

Kia: Oh yes you are Yasho Urameshi! *Grabs his ear*

Yasho: Ow! Kia... come on... ow... let go of my ear at least... ow... KIA!

At School............

Yasho: Ow... Kia let go... come on... ow... this...ow...is embarrassing...ow

Kia: Well then you shouldn’t have told me that you were going to skip school.

Yasho: You would’ve...ow... found out anyways...ow

Kia: That’s right brother. *Lets go of his ear* Now we need to hurry up so we can meet up with the others.

Yasho: Fine.

*They get into a fight*

Yusuke: I don’t know what the hell is going on but let’s get out of here.

*All of a sudden a black portal appeared*

Kuwabara: I guess we go through there.

*They all walk through and end up in Koenma’s office*

Koenma: OH GREAT! Botan you know what to do.

Botan: Right. But what school should I send them to?

Koenma: Saryaski Jr. High.

Botan: But that’s their kid’s school!

Koenma: Also make sure their wives get there too.

Botan: How could that happen though!? They weren’t even there!

Koenma: If a man gets turned into a teenager by that demon then so do their life partners and then...

Botan: I’ll go now. *Fly’s off*

Koenma: I’m sending you guys to school.

This isn't as bad as I've seen. But it drew me in with the children that seemed to be copies of their own parents. I'm searching for some more YYH sues in my trip to FF.net.

^_^; Good day.

animesues @ 2004-02-13T22:00:00

2004-02-14T03:03:00Z

Story Or Series Title:The Mysterious Girl
Fandom: Yu-Gi-Oh
~~Culprit~~ Author's Name: Faerie Magick

Full Name (plus titles if any): Tomoyo
Full Species(es): Millenium Item User Girl
Hair Color (include adjectives): Not mentioined.
Eye Color (include adjectives): Not mentioned.
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Not Mentioned. (Apparently the author doesn't want to give the reader's a view of the character)
Special Possessions (if any): The second Millenium Puzzle. (Like gasp!)

Annoying Origin: You see, Peggy killed her parents and she wants revenge.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Millenium Item Holder
Annoying Special Abilities: She can dual.
Other Annoying Traits: She's 'weak'.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

"That's A Millenium Puzzle!" She exclaimed. ".....I thought I was the only....."
"You have one too?!" The group exclaimed. Tomoyo stood up and completely turned, and
there around her neck was annother millenium puzzle

"Why?" Tomoyo asked curiously. "What's so special about it? I mean I know
they're rare but....."
"They're powerful." Yugi said. "Mine, when I'm dueling, it gives me this feeling of
someone coaching me through the duel."
"Huh. Mine never has yet."
"That's because she's weak!" A voice exclaimed.

The playing field came up as usual, and both Billy and Tomoyo rook their places.
"I'll wager 3 starchips, since that's what you have, and what I have as well." Billy
said.
Tomoyo paused, this means she would have to win, or else she'd have to leave the
island. ".....You got a deal." she said.

At least this isn't worse I've seen. I should do a Sailor Moon sue one day. Their are like 10k AUs there---their must be some form of sue.

animesues @ 2004-02-06T09:00:00

2004-02-06T14:02:28Z

Story Or Series Title: pokemon: Final Year
Fandom: Pokemon
~~Culprit~~ Author's Name: Black-Monkey

Full Name (plus titles if any): Faith Evans
Full Species(es): Helpless Girl in the Woods
Hair Color (include adjectives): "She had medium curly light brown hair, which she wore down"
Eye Color (include adjectives): "her hazel eyes reflected the light of the sun" Sounds like that hurts. x_o;
Unusual Markings/Colorations:
Special Possessions (if any): Lotsa rare Pokemon that she didn't even 'catch'.

Annoying Origin: In the woods.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Apparently, Ash and James fall in love with her. Brock does...but he falls in love with any women.
Annoying Special Abilities: She can cook.
Other Annoying Traits: She has a Mew. K...'nuff said.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

"So your trying to be a Pokemon master, right Ash?" Faith asked.

"Yup. I wanna be the best." Ash said. "By the way, I hope you don't find it rude, but, how come you have 2 rare Pokemon?" he asked.

"Oh.I have more than two, the two you just meet are the ones that I've had the longest."

"Wow, how did you catch them all?"

"That's the funny thing, I didn't catch them, and somehow they came to me. Would you like to see the rest of the gang?"

"Sure!!" Everyone said with excitement.

Ok then." Faith said as she let out Mew, Absol, Dragonite, Kyogre, Latios, and Latias. Then in a nearby bush team rocket was spying on Ash and the gang from afar.

"WOW!! LOOK AT ALL THE RARE POKEMON, WE HAVE TO GET THEM!!!!!!" Jesse stated as her eyes shined up.

animesues @ 2004-01-25T10:59:00

2004-01-25T16:17:22Z

First Sue. Sadly, it came from a good friend and a person that is in a group I'm in.

Story Or Series Title:Two T's and Two K's
Fandom: Digimon 02
~~Culprit~~ Author's Name:Tony and Katie

Full Name (plus titles if any):Tony and Katie
Full Species(es):Cannon Rapist Stu and Uber Cannon Glomper
Hair Color (include adjectives):Red Hair - Tony (not mentioned, but is known by fact.)
Eye Color (include adjectives): Hazel Eyes - Tony (not mentioned, but is known by fact.<
Unusual Markings/Colorations: Nope.
Special Possessions (if any): Digivices and Digimon

Annoying Origin: Hell. Er--Japan.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Tony is Hikari's girlfriend and Katie is Taichi's. (However, Katie likes to hit on other Chosen Children.)
Annoying Special Abilities: Having sex with cannon.
Other Annoying Traits: Bashing Daisuke and Miyako.

Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Katie: **Takes Tony's d-vice and runs off with it**
BUWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Tony: [The Agumon jumps out and D-Volves to MetalGreymon]

Katie: AHHH!

MetalGreymon: Give the Digivice back

Katie: "I wish Tai would come to save me!!!" NO!!

MetalGreymon: GIGA BLAST---

Katie: Okies! Fine! Here
*gives it back*

Oh yes, there's sex too.

Kari: Wow...nobody's here either

Tony: Yeah, good thing to...

Kari: Perfect!!! Hey, how bad are you gonna get!?! **giggles**

Tony: As bad as you need... [laughs lightly]

Kari: How bad do I want?? Hmm......u pick!

Tony: Well lets put it this way Hikari, they'd NEVER be able to show
this on TV

Kari: Bring it on, Tony

With cannon bashing...

[they go back to real world, leaving Davis to perish]